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Pantoum

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He was a hard and bitter boy
with a temper as hot as fire.
It was like he held no joy.
Just a bitter, dark desire.

He had a temper as hot as fire.
You could see it in his eyes.
A bitter, dark desire
in his beautiful deep blue eyes.

You could see the fire in his eyes
He wanted his tormentor to be slain
Such beautiful deep blue eyes.
He just couldn’t keep it contained.

He wanted his tormentor to be slain,
so he let out the monster inside him.
He just couldn’t keep it contained.
His tormentor was dead by mornin’

He let out the monster inside him.
It was the monster that held no joy.
His tormentor was dead by mornin’
Now he’s no longer a hard and bitter boy.
Still can't quite figure out a good title for this piece. This sort of form is called a pantoum, and surprisengly, i really like this style of poetry XD
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